Friday, November 8, 2013

The Revenge of Peter Rabbit

This is Chris's journal entry with a prompt for our first classes with our homeschool group, ETCH.

It started out like any other day in Mr.Mcgregors garden then something very strange happened.The scarecrow blinked once.He blinked a second time.He coughed.....

Then he jumped up and ran after Mr.Mcgregor. But the scarecrow was really peter rabbit.He wanted revenge on Mr.Mcgregor. Then after running around peter finally cornered Mr.Mcgregor and jumped on top of Mr.Mcgregor. then he ran away laughing and saying I finally got my revenge.

By Chris Derr, Age 11, 10/11/13